Monday 28 July 2008

One Word Topic Essay - Friends

Everyone needs friends, including myself. But, you do not just go around picking anyhow. There are good friends and bad friends too. So, we must learn to choose our friends carefully, as it may affect your life.

Firstly, when you pick your friends, examine the clothes that they wear. The way in which they wear they clothes, gives different impressions. If they are wearing their outfits nice and neatly, it gives the impression that they are neat and tidy in their actions, so they are good friends. But, on the other hand, if they wear their clothes sloppishly, wearing fake jewellery and all that kind of stuff, it gives you the impression that they are lazy in their actions, which makes them bad friends.

Secondly, their language. The words that they use, if too often heard by yourself, you might get influenced. I fyour friends talk to you with respect, they are good friends in a sense that they respect you. But, if they talk loudly and start spewing out vulgarities from thier mouth, it is preety obvious that they are not friends you would want to be with.

Lastly, their behaviour. Good friends treat you nicely and go out together and have fun, whereas bad friends often do things like smoking, take drugs, steal, and everything else bad you can think of. Thus, their behaviour is very important in choosing friends.

In conclusion, although almost anyone can be your friend, it is better to be wise and choose your friends carefully. True friends are those who will be with you no matter what and not leave you in the lurch.

2 comments:

FongSin said...

Do not start with "but" anymore.

Your Introduction talk about choosing good friends, but your supporting paragraphs are about how to judge friends.

Your conclusion introduce a new idea.

Anonymous said...

hihi.your essay is short and sweet.there is one thing you can do which is to elaborate each point more haha.overall, well done:D